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1media/Marshall Plantation Big House.jpg2020-11-16T17:59:47+00:00Mathu's Thoughts14image_header2021-05-21T19:15:19+00:00By Oakley Montgomery
This poem derives from an early typescript draft, with an alternate spelling of Candy's name. It features a scene of Candy pleading to Mathu to resist his arrest. In response, my poem gives Mathu a chance to speak to Candi as if they were alone. Gaines never shows Mathu expressing his sensitive nature. However, it is evident that he loves Candy, even if he showed it differently than Candy expected. I like to imagine that his interaction with Candy might have been different. So, I took quotes from the chapter and developed Mathu's thought process in a different way than shown on the draft pages. The italic words are the words I imagine Mathu wanted to say but did not speak aloud.
“Somebody’s gotta go, Miss Marshall,” Mathu says. “The people done picked me.”
The people done picked me. Somebody’s gotta go.
My time has come I gotta go, Candi They done picked me There nothin to question It’s me My time They done picked me My time OUR time “I carried you on my back, I held your hand. I carried your daddy on my back, too, and held his hand.”
I held your hand. I carried you on my back. I held your hand.
I remember those days, Candi Don’t worry I remember picking those berries Gotta watch out for those sour ones They hurt your cheeks I carried your daddy on my back Just like I carried you I remember how tiny your hand was in mine But they done picked me It’s my time I held your hand You gotta let go of mine “A man is all I ever wanted to be. All I ever tried to be. Nothing more, nothing else.”
A man is all I ever wanted to be. Nothing more.
A man That’s what I want to be, Candi What I need to be Nothing more A man They done picked me to be the man That’s what I gotta do That’s what I wanna do, Candi Mathu is a man I am a man That’s all I want to be Nothing more Nothing else